Ohio Impromptu

Its funny, that reminded me of part of a book I'm reading for English class. Its called The Chocolate War and the way it describes one of the defining aspects ...

Very nice. The feeling and description was nothing short of wonderful. I liked how you started with those last two lines from your story, gave the poem direction right from ...

Interesting...very interesting. I liked it a lot, but somehow differently to the stuff I've liked before. It almost felt like it was meant to make its point by not having ...

I'm sorry, but i do not like this. Its wayyyyyyy too Boulevarde of Broken Dreams for my liking. I guess you can take that as a compliment though. Still, didnt ...

I loved almost all of those CL! However there was one that caught my attention more than the rest. [viii] did you ever see or hear the man who played ...

It painted a very vivid picture. Nicely done. I can't crit this much more than CL did so just listen to what she said and know that i agree with ...

Simply amazing. I love the use of colour descriptions. It was great until about this line and the calender is hung on every wall and then it just got better. ...

I feel proud that one of my titles spawned something better than anything I've ever written. :) Seriously, that was amazing. The desperation (for lack of a better word) was ...

Haha, wow. Thats the second piece I've read tonight that is simply amazing. Why is everyone so much better than me?! :( Anyways, keep up the great work. Always keep ...

Simply amazing. Anything short of a 10/10 wouldnt do it justice at all. Thats all i can say really. Just know that you have amazing talent. Good day to you. ...

Hmmm...theres no denying there was a tonne of feeling behind it, but the way it was written kinda made me think of Dr. Suess. That doesnt necessarily mean its bad, ...

Simple, yet good. After i read it i thought to myself that maybe it would be better if it were longer. Then i realized that if it were longer it ...

This was amazing! The first stanza was my favourite. The night which dives onto all of the pavements, grass, eyelashes, runs into the glass of my bedroom window and seeps ...

Unlike to everyone else, this made total sense to me. :? Do i have a problem or does everyone else? Aside from a few spelling mistakes i thought this was ...

It was different to say the least. Someone mentioned before that it was "Peter-Pan-esque" and thats what i gathered from it too. Not a bad thing at all, more poetry ...